2011年4月22日 星期五

修辭是否允許主被動平衡??


文章日期:2011-04-22 09:28
※ 引述《utn (哼~~~~)》之銘言:
: 各位板文們~~~
: 我是gmat的菜鳥
: 最近在做pp時有些觀念還是不太清楚
: 所以想請教大家
: 就是考平衡法時,一個是主動、一個是被動的話,可以刪掉嗎?
: 也就是說
:  A子句 and/or B子句
: 其中,A子句是主動,B子句是被動式的話,這樣可以刪掉嗎?

                                                                             
不行,GMAT沒有在考這個判題點(可能是我們Microsoft Word用太多才有這樣的感覺),
以下是幾個主被動平衡的正確答案:
                                                                             
GWD-9-Q15
Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, the
first woman to draw a soldier's pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782
at the age of 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because
she had become too ill to serve.
                                                                             
注意主動joined和被動was injured和was discharged是三個動詞平衡。
                                                                             
78.(28671-!-item-!-188;#058&004007)
First discovered more than 30 years ago, Lina's sunbird, a four-and-a-half-inch
animal found in the Philippines and resembling a hummingbird, has shimmering
metallic colors on its head; a brilliant orange patch, bordered with red tufts,
in the center of its breast; and a red eye.
                                                                             
注意以上分詞是found及resembling,主被動平衡。